be concise! 
    do not use several words when one will do. writers tend to add phrases like "take into consideration" in order to sound scholarly. this only makes the text sound inflated and sophomoric. don't use excessive and unnecessary verbiage. 
    wordy: i am of the opinion that the said managers should be admonished for their utilization of customer response services. 
    concise: we should tell the managers to improve customer service.

    wordy: this internet company is not prepared to expand at this point in time. 
    concise: the internet company is not prepared to expand now. 
    wordy: in light of the fact that roger has worked with much effort and diligence to build this site, it would be a smart move to give him the contract. 
    concise: since roger has worked for this site so carefully, we should award him the contract.